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Undergraduate
Collaborative Essays
Looking Back &
Constructive, not a cop-out
Averil Bolster
Peter Levrai
University of Macau
We rewrote the Level 2 course in summer 2014
We developed an EAP course
Process
Writing
Over 1,100
students
24 students
per class
5 Classes per
teacher
Why Consider Group Essays?
Rationale for Collaborative Essays
• Group writing is widespread in universities (Scotland,
2016)
• Group writing has added benefits e.g. teamwork &
critical thinking (Shin, 2015)
• Group writing leads to better quality essays than
individual writing (Wigglesworth & Storch, 2009;
Shehadeh, 2011)
• Results in better task fulfilment, grammatical accuracy
and complexity (Storch, 2005; Mulligan & Garofalo, 2011)
• Results in better grades (Mulligan & Garofalo, 2011;
Berry, 2007)
• Group-work helps with employability (Wigglesworth &
Storch, 2009)
How it worked
Groups of three
Mixed gender,
mixed language,
mixed major
No pre-assigned
roles
The Essay Process: Pilot Year
Notes on a
source
(individual)
Outline
(group)
Paragraph
(individual)
First draft
(group)
Second draft
(group)
Final Draft
(group)
Increase individual writing in
course
Monitor of group-work process
Emphasize planning and use of
online tools
Mix of group and individual
marks
Majority of students engage fully
in group essays
Reflecting on Common Concerns
Insufficient amount of writing
Uneven workload/unequal
contribution
Timing: students don’t meet
outside of class
Unfair/over-generous grade due
to other students
Opposition by students
The Essay Process: Year 2
Moodle discussion of
input texts (individual)
Group ground rules
(group)
‘Stormboard’
discussion of potential
sources (group)
Mini bibliography
(individual)
Outline (group)
First draft (group)
Group work stop,
check, reflect
(individual)
Tutorial (group) Second draft (group)
Peer feedback
(individual)
Final Draft (group)
Group-work reflection
(individual)
Our Students’
Perceptions
‘I understand what makes a good
essay’
Agree completely Agree
Disagree Disagree completely
Agree completely Agree
Disagree Disagree completely
Pilot Year
168 students
Year 2
194 students
‘I am better at essay writing’
Agree completely Agree
Disagree Disagree completely
Agree completely Agree
Disagree Disagree completely
Pilot Year
167 students
Year 2
193 students
‘I would recommend group essays’
Yes No NA Yes No NA
Pilot Year
169 students
Year 2
195 students
Reasons for recommendation
No
More ideas (5)
More disagreements (4)
More time (3)
Not equal distribution of
work (3)
More difficult (1)
Yes
More ideas (45)
Develop teamwork (40)
Share opinions (25)
Share workload (19)
Write a better essay (19)
Develop communication
skills (18)
PilotYear
Reasons for recommendation
No
Hard to organize ideas
(8)
Can’t show personal
ability (6)
More ideas (6)
More disagreements (5)
Not equal distribution of
work (4)
Yes
More ideas (59)
Better essay (38)
Share opinions (34)
Improve quality of ideas
(34)
Support & learn from each
other (33)
Develop teamwork (30)
Year2
Conclusion
• Logistics is the least important reason to do
collaborative essays.
• Group essays can not be approached in the same
way as individual essays.
• Less marking but more monitoring.
• With teacher support, collaborative essay
assignments can be very successful.
• Collaborative essays develop more than just essay
writing skills.
• Wider learning gains should be explicit objectives.
Bibliography
Berry, E. (2007). Group work and assessment—benefit or burden?. The Law Teacher, 41(1), 19-36.
Li, M., & Campbell, J. (2008). Asian students’ perceptions of group work and group assignments in a New
Zealand tertiary institution. Intercultural Education, 19(3), 203-216.
Mulligan, C., & Garofalo, R. (2011). A collaborative writing approach: Methodology and student
assessment. The Language Teacher, 35(3), 5-10.
Scotland, J. (2016). How the experience of assessed collaborative writing impacts on undergraduate
students’ perceptions of assessed group work. Assessment & Evaluation in Higher Education, 41(1),
15-34.
Shehadeh, A. (2011). Effects and student perceptions of collaborative writing in L2. Journal of Second
Language Writing, 20(4), 286-305.
Shin, M. (2015). Collaborative learning. English Teaching Professional, 97, 11-13.
Storch, N. (2005). Collaborative writing: Product, process, and students’ reflections. Journal of second
language writing, 14(3), 153-173.
Wigglesworth, G., & Storch, N. (2009). Pair versus individual writing: Effects on fluency, complexity and
accuracy. Language Testing.
Q & A
abolster@umac.mo
plevrai@umac.mo
Any questions?
averilbolster@gmail.com
peterlevrai@gmail.com
Stormboard

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Undergraduate Collaborative Essays: Constructive not a cop-out

  • 1. Undergraduate Collaborative Essays Looking Back & Constructive, not a cop-out Averil Bolster Peter Levrai
  • 2. University of Macau We rewrote the Level 2 course in summer 2014 We developed an EAP course
  • 3. Process Writing Over 1,100 students 24 students per class 5 Classes per teacher Why Consider Group Essays?
  • 4. Rationale for Collaborative Essays • Group writing is widespread in universities (Scotland, 2016) • Group writing has added benefits e.g. teamwork & critical thinking (Shin, 2015) • Group writing leads to better quality essays than individual writing (Wigglesworth & Storch, 2009; Shehadeh, 2011) • Results in better task fulfilment, grammatical accuracy and complexity (Storch, 2005; Mulligan & Garofalo, 2011) • Results in better grades (Mulligan & Garofalo, 2011; Berry, 2007) • Group-work helps with employability (Wigglesworth & Storch, 2009)
  • 5. How it worked Groups of three Mixed gender, mixed language, mixed major No pre-assigned roles
  • 6. The Essay Process: Pilot Year Notes on a source (individual) Outline (group) Paragraph (individual) First draft (group) Second draft (group) Final Draft (group)
  • 7. Increase individual writing in course Monitor of group-work process Emphasize planning and use of online tools Mix of group and individual marks Majority of students engage fully in group essays Reflecting on Common Concerns Insufficient amount of writing Uneven workload/unequal contribution Timing: students don’t meet outside of class Unfair/over-generous grade due to other students Opposition by students
  • 8. The Essay Process: Year 2 Moodle discussion of input texts (individual) Group ground rules (group) ‘Stormboard’ discussion of potential sources (group) Mini bibliography (individual) Outline (group) First draft (group) Group work stop, check, reflect (individual) Tutorial (group) Second draft (group) Peer feedback (individual) Final Draft (group) Group-work reflection (individual)
  • 10. ‘I understand what makes a good essay’ Agree completely Agree Disagree Disagree completely Agree completely Agree Disagree Disagree completely Pilot Year 168 students Year 2 194 students
  • 11. ‘I am better at essay writing’ Agree completely Agree Disagree Disagree completely Agree completely Agree Disagree Disagree completely Pilot Year 167 students Year 2 193 students
  • 12. ‘I would recommend group essays’ Yes No NA Yes No NA Pilot Year 169 students Year 2 195 students
  • 13. Reasons for recommendation No More ideas (5) More disagreements (4) More time (3) Not equal distribution of work (3) More difficult (1) Yes More ideas (45) Develop teamwork (40) Share opinions (25) Share workload (19) Write a better essay (19) Develop communication skills (18) PilotYear
  • 14. Reasons for recommendation No Hard to organize ideas (8) Can’t show personal ability (6) More ideas (6) More disagreements (5) Not equal distribution of work (4) Yes More ideas (59) Better essay (38) Share opinions (34) Improve quality of ideas (34) Support & learn from each other (33) Develop teamwork (30) Year2
  • 15. Conclusion • Logistics is the least important reason to do collaborative essays. • Group essays can not be approached in the same way as individual essays. • Less marking but more monitoring. • With teacher support, collaborative essay assignments can be very successful. • Collaborative essays develop more than just essay writing skills. • Wider learning gains should be explicit objectives.
  • 16. Bibliography Berry, E. (2007). Group work and assessment—benefit or burden?. The Law Teacher, 41(1), 19-36. Li, M., & Campbell, J. (2008). Asian students’ perceptions of group work and group assignments in a New Zealand tertiary institution. Intercultural Education, 19(3), 203-216. Mulligan, C., & Garofalo, R. (2011). A collaborative writing approach: Methodology and student assessment. The Language Teacher, 35(3), 5-10. Scotland, J. (2016). How the experience of assessed collaborative writing impacts on undergraduate students’ perceptions of assessed group work. Assessment & Evaluation in Higher Education, 41(1), 15-34. Shehadeh, A. (2011). Effects and student perceptions of collaborative writing in L2. Journal of Second Language Writing, 20(4), 286-305. Shin, M. (2015). Collaborative learning. English Teaching Professional, 97, 11-13. Storch, N. (2005). Collaborative writing: Product, process, and students’ reflections. Journal of second language writing, 14(3), 153-173. Wigglesworth, G., & Storch, N. (2009). Pair versus individual writing: Effects on fluency, complexity and accuracy. Language Testing.
  • 17. Q & A abolster@umac.mo plevrai@umac.mo Any questions? averilbolster@gmail.com peterlevrai@gmail.com